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Adele’s Lesson To Writers – And Everyone Else

"I'm sorry. I can't mess this up..." "I was devastated." These are the now world-famous words of Grammy Award winner Adele, who showed the world that even in front of millions of people, it's better to stop, start over and do it right rather than forge ahead with a...

How To Destroy Action and Suspense Scenes

You're reading an action scene; things are really getting hot. Who will live? Will someone die? Is there a chase that's moving like lightning? You're reading a suspense scene; it's really intense. Will the protagonist be discovered? Will the escapee be recaptured? Can...

Supernatural Spelling Mistake

This product will haunt your lips forever. As seen in an advertisement for lip butter: "Supernatural" is a word, which is why software probably didn't pick it up. Be careful with your spelling!

Do your words serve your story – or do they serve you?

by Anita Stratos, Proof Positive editor Picture this: you’re craving apple pie – one of those “just gotta have it” days – so you go to your favorite café and order up a slice. Your mouth waters when the server puts your pie in front of you, but when you look closer,...

Inedible Spelling Mistake

If you read this carefully, you'll realize this menu item would be dangerous to consume...and potentially disgusting. What funny misspellings have you seen lately?

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Awethors Event: Why I Love Supporting Indie Authors

Get Down With The Awethors co-creator D.M. Cain graciously suggested that I should do an interview too. As I haven't published a full book yet, I thought I'd take her up on it in a different way: by telling you why I love all of you. Indie authors have something...

Backward Writing – Withholding Critical Information

by Anita Stratos, Proof Positive Editor In psychology, when a person withholds affection from their partner, it’s considered a form of emotional abuse. In writing, withholding important information from the reader could almost be classified as story suicide. I’m not...

Confessions of a Binge Word Writer

by Anita Stratos, Proof Positive Editor I have a confession to make. I’m a binge word writer. I tend to binge on certain words or phrases when writing a first draft like they were my favorite flavor of ice cream. In fact, if the first draft of my writing was ice...

Angel Sinclair doesn’t save women. He owns them.

PromiseI haven’t spoken in a year.The last words I said out loud…They were a PROMISE to my mother as she lay dying in...

Should nicknames be capitalized?

Nickname capitalization is a permanent topic of debate. To lowercase or to capitalize, that is the question. Chicago...

The chance of a lifetime, a dream trip…and the K-pop idol who could ruin her

Sara is thirty-two, a post-doc researcher in Turin, Italy, and thoroughly done with a career that keeps her name off...

What happens when home is where your broken heart is?

Minhwa swore he would never go back. Not to the town that shattered his heart. But life had other plans. Now part of...

Proof Positive’s Anniversary – 13 Years of Editing!

We're celebrating 13 years in business today! That's 13 years meticulously editing and thoroughly enjoying all kinds...

Bonnie Hardy’s debut historical mystery, An Unsuitable Job, wins three awards

Congratulations to Bonnie Hardy on the awards she earned for her latest release, An Unsuitable Job! Her awards...

Book Launch: When enemies become friends, those you trusted must be killed

Imprisoned by Xavier Delgado and betrayed by the rival she swore never to love, Isa Morales has lost everything—her...

An original, suspenseful thriller filled with obsession, psychological drama, and medical malice

Is blood really thicker than water? Something is terribly wrong at Angiras, a family-owned medical start-up. Neddy...

Book Launch: When revenge calls, she answers with vengeance

The past won't let her go. Samantha has escaped an abusive marriage, and finally left the dark secrets from her youth...

Book Launch: Old Hollywood Monsters Are Real, and So Are Fated Mates

What if classic movies weren’t the only places in Hollywood to find monsters? Charlotte-Kay The sixties have ushered...