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Why Freelance Writing is Your Creative Writing Inspiration

by Anita Stratos, Proof Positive editor

One thing I’ve noticed about the writing world – it likes to separate itself into groups. I’m not talking about genres. Two of the main groups I’ve noticed are “Writing for Hire” and “Creative Writing”, and members of each can sometimes cast disapproving glances at the other.

Though it may seem that never the twain shall meet, they do…if you look at your paid gigs through creative eyes.

I’ve had about 1,000 articles published, most of which are in print publications, but a couple hundred are in either online publications or publications that are both online and in print. I can safely say that only a scant few of all those published pieces are completely devoid of fodder for my fiction writing.

Here’s an example.

When I was writing feature newspaper pieces, I had an assignment to interview a man who trains guard dogs. The focus of the article was not only to discuss his business and how he happened to get into it, but also how people could train their own dogs in property protection.

Sounds simple, right?

Well, you just never know. And that’s one of the things I love about freelance writing.

While heading to do the interview, I had to double check the address when, in an upscale suburban town, I turned my car into the one and only driveway that looked like a jungle, completely enveloped by overgrown trees, vines, and shrubbery gone wild. I could almost hear the call of macaws and the roar of lions. The entire property was isolated by quite a few acres of “jungle”, so there were no immediate neighbors.

When my car emerged from the long, overgrown driveway, I was greeted by the sound of deep, angry barks coming from huge, muscular dogs in crates; none of them looked happy to see me. Their crates were scattered on the hard dirt ground around a small red ramshackle house that had seen much better days.

I was terrified to get out of my car. I had arrived on time, so I waited for my interviewee to Baddogcome out of the house, since his living alarms had all gone off and were making more of a racket than Fourth of July fireworks.

But no one came out, so I called him from my cell phone. He laughed and told me I didn’t have to worry about the dogs, but I wasn’t buying it – they hadn’t taken their eyes off me and looked like they wanted to tear right through the cage bars to get at my throat. He laughingly agreed to come out.

His appearance shocked me. He was about ninety years old and on the frail side, with unkempt flowing white hair, a worn red plaid shirt, and jeans from 1950. He didn’t look like he could stop an ant, let alone stop one of those massive dogs from attacking. I figured we’d talk about the dogs (quickly), tour his training grounds (very quickly), and I could get the heck out of there.

Not so.

He escorted me between the cages and into the house, despite every one of my own internal alarms going off. The rooms were tiny, outdated by decades with torn furniture, and there were yet more cages with hundred-pound dogs growling and barking. These didn’t seem like trained guard dogs – they acted more like hungry attack dogs.

That isn’t the end of the story, but you get the idea.

This and many other interesting situations (thankfully not as dangerous) happened regularly in my life as a “writer for hire”. The possibility for storylines, subplots, and quirky characters is endless, even when you interview people and write about situations that aren’t as extreme. So many things can be discovered during interview conversations that it’s an endless supply of behaviors, quirks, language use and misuse, habits, surroundings – the list goes on and on.

So don’t turn your nose up at freelance writing to supplement your income as a fiction writer, just view it as living, breathing fodder for your novels…that you’re getting paid to discover.

Meet Author TC Michael

Author TC Michael describes himself as being “an epic daydreamer with a wild imagination”, and nothing could better prove this description than his first full-length novel, Secret of the Last Born. The first in the Dark Rising series, Michael mixes common fables and folklore with his own complex fantasy world in a unique, action-packed book of mystery,  romance, and self-discovery. Proof Positive is excited to share our interview with this burgeoning young author. 

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Is this your first book? How long did it take you to plan it before you began writing it?

Yes and no. This is my first full-length book, but I have had a few short pieces published in the past. With this being my first novel I realized after I wrote the book that there is no “too much” or “too long” on planning. I spent roughly two months in the planning phase before I started the first rough draft.

Is this book part of a series? If so, when can we look forward to the next book being published?

Yes! Secret of the Last Born is book 1 in the Dark Rising series. Book two will be out no later than the end of February, but there isn’t an official release date yet.

Do you mostly write in this particular genre or do you dabble in other genres? If so, which ones?

So far I have only written in the fantasy genre, but I definitely have plans in the future to expand that reach.

What do you think makes your work stand apart from other works in your genre?

Secret of the Last Born is a story about magic, love, and loss. It’s full of twists, turns, and conflicts. But I think the main reason that it stands out from the rest is because it has a good sense of realism. Not in a direct way, but in a way where magic doesn’t take over and the reader forgets about the real world that the characters live in. You will always be able to find a sense of connection with the characters because they are like you, and probably in more than one way.

Are any of the characters in your book based on people you know or have seen/talked to in real life?

I would say most of the characters seen in Secret of the Last Born are based upon multiple characteristics from multiple people. I definitely like to base fictional characters on people in real life, but in this book that isn’t the case. As planning continued I decided the characters would just slowly come together, and that’s what happened.

Do your friends and family know you’re a writer? Were they surprised when you told them?

Most know that I am a writer. There are still a few who don’t know, but all of those close to me know that I’m a writer, and that’s what I love doing. I would say “surprised” would describe maybe a quarter of them. Most of them expected it because I’ve always loved writing. I have had a really supportive family to keep me going.

What inspires you to write? Music? Other books? Real life events? Just an incredible imagination?

Many things! Other books, wonderful authors, mostly life events – both bad and good, and a very good imagination. Throughout my younger years I used to spend countless hours every day imagining different worlds, and imagining our world if things had gone differently in the past.

Are you part of any writers’ groups? If so, what do you like about them? How do they help you or inspire you? If not, why not?

I am not part of any writers’ groups…yet. But I will be soon!

Do you plan your writing out with outlines, character development exercises, and other pre-writing activities? Or do you just write as it comes to you?

I think many authors have one set routine, and some authors just go with whatever they think will work for that specific story they want to tell. In a sense, I’m the type that will go with whatever they think will help the situation the best, but I am beginning to form my own routine. With Secret of the Last Born, I realized the method that works very well is as follows: Get idea>brainstorm details>list details>character ideas>form characters and character backgrounds>outline (at least two drafts)>ask others what they think about the idea. This is the basic structure of preparing; there are several smaller details that I didn’t add, but you get the point.

Did you do any research for this book?

Yes, and research is harder work than most think! You have to search for long periods of time until you find exactly what you’re looking for. Even if it’s only a minor detail. With this being my first full-length book I feel like I could’ve done a bit more research, but hey, it takes practice to become a great writer. Research is very important for all books, and I think without it you would have a story that no one is interested in.

Do you read the kinds of books you like to write? Do you watch movies similar to or the same genre as your writing?

Oh you better believe it. I read all kinds of books, but probably 85% of them are in the same genre I’m writing. Movies are a little different; I’m a huge move fanatic, I love watching movies of all kinds. I certainly watch a lot of movies in the same genre though!

If you could write anywhere in the world – in a fictional or non-fictional place – where would you write?

1. At home 2. At any huge, quiet, shady park 3. On the mountains. There are too many fictional places to count, but I would write at all of those places too!

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Connect with TC Michael:
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Check out Secret of the Last Born:
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Intention vs. Reality in Writing

“But Your Honor, I intended to help that little old lady across the street. Her purse handle just happened to loop over my arm, and I didn’t realize it was there until I was several blocks away and that cop tackled me!”

Do you think any judge in the world would believe that statement? More importantly, do you think he even cares about the thought process or supposed intention the defendant had? No? Well, the same thing goes for writing – readers are your judges, and they don’t know or care about your intentions, they only know and care about what’s actually written on the page.

And since the only reality your readers know is what they read, you have to make your intentions perfectly clear in the written word. Readers can’t stop to think about what you Question_Guymay have intended when a scene or sentence doesn’t quite make sense or fit with a character’s personality or situation. Nor should they have to. And they’re not mind readers either.

Sometimes when we’re writing, we’re so in touch with our characters and their situations that we don’t clarify our intentions in a scene well enough.

Have you ever had a teacher whose lectures could only be understood by someone already knowledgeable in the field, while those of us on the “outside” couldn’t grasp their meaning? Or read instructions that skipped over the details and assumed the user would just “get it”? I think we’ve all experienced at least one of these things; personally, I’ve been on the receiving end of both. And it’s very frustrating.

Writers hire editors to take an objective look at their work before it’s published – at that point, the editor is one of your first readers, so if something is unclear or confusing to her/him, it will most likely be unclear to your future readers as well.

An editor’s job is to point out these problems within a story and suggest a better way.
A writer’s job is to take that point constructively and seriously consider the possibility that it needs modification in order to be easily understood or fit with the rest of the story.

But sometimes a writer is so married to their work that they become defensive about every line, even saying that they think readers will understand their intentions that aren’t written or just allow for incongruous scenes. If you, as a writer, hear yourself saying that, STOP. While the final decision always belongs to the writer as to how the book is written, it serves your book – and your readers – best if you consider the possibility that your intentions are not coming across in your writing.

The upshot: unless you’re writing experimental literature in which readers expect and want to spend time figuring things out, your words need to clearly convey your intentions, not suggest or skirt them.

Meet Author Kevin Zdrill

It’s not easy to craft a story that seamlessly weaves together disparate lives and situations, each in their own world yet ultimately affecting each other. But Kevin Zdrill has done this flawlessly in his book Crazy, Mixed-Up World, a novel whose characters and relationships are so relatable that readers will recognize and be touched by more than one.

In this author interview, Kevin shares his motivation and inspiration for writing this book; we think you’ll find it as interesting as we did.

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Is this your first book? How long did it take you to plan it before you began writing it?

This is my third book. My first two books, No Kiss Good-Night and Boom Chicka Wah Wah are a comedic dating series. Crazy, Mixed-Up World’s planning quickly unfolded within a month despite the complexities of the storyline.

What do you think makes your work stand out?

It’s a story premise that quickly draws the reader into the situational lives of the characters. The use of dialogue is crisp and engaging with descriptive settings kept to a minimum for brisk pacing. Readers tell me they find themselves reflecting on the book long after its completion.

Would you say this book fits into a particular genre or would you say its more of a commentary on contemporary life?

This book blurs the lines between several genres because it is a commentary on contemporary life and the diversities of social issues making it difficult to corral it into one category.

The characters in your book are very diverse – are any of them based on people you know or have seen/talked to in real life? Is there one youd like to know in real life?

I’ve stayed away from developing a character based on someone I’ve actually met, believing it constricts the potential for where I can take the character’s development. That being said, I’ve been intrigued by situations described to me that have found places within my books in various designs.

Your characters are all so different from each other, as are their lifestyles and situations, yet you gave each one a distinct voice and circumstance. Did you find it difficult to immerse yourself in so many different characters personalities/situations so you could write authentically from each ones POV?

The beauty of people as individuals is that there are no limits for distinct voices and personalities. In my careers in banking and mental health, I’ve had the wonderful opportunity to meet and interview well over ten thousand people. The richness of personalities makes it very simple for me to immerse myself into an array of completely distinct characters and have a ton of fun with them.

Do you plan your writing with outlines, character development exercises, and other pre-writing activities? Or do you just write as it comes to you?

I’ve become more disciplined in scripting out an outline and character profiles after suffering nightmarish editing to fix errors. While it’s easier to initally wing it, the price to pay in the final polish is huge. However, most chapters and scenes, despite adhering to a script, often take on a life of their own while I’m writing and I’ll roll with whatever direction it takes me. It’s often during these times that the best magic is written and character dialogue clicks.

Did you do any special research for this book?

For this book I wanted to incorporate a few specific mental health personality disorders to bring to life very real and very specific behavorial themes.

Do your friends and family know youre a writer? Were they surprised when you told them?

There’s that inital shock when family and friends discover about the books I’ve written. In the past, the first reaction was a request to read the book. Everyone was so eager to finally see what went on inside my head! The frustration back in those days amounted to having zero avenues to get a book into print. Now, the reaction from friends each time I release a book is where I found the time to write with two boys under the age of three. Frankly, I think that surprises me as well!

What inspires you to write? Music? Other books? Real life events? Just an incredible imagination?

I’m always thinking. I’m always reflecting. And I’m always putting myself in situations that become fodder for a book. I can be listening to a song, hear a lyric or a line spoken by an actor in a movie and an entire book idea comes tumbling within my head. I’ve had dreams so vivid and detailed they became storylines. A case in point, Crazy Mixed-Up World was sparked simply by a song that had a line that caught and germinated the entire book’s concept inside my head.

Are you part of any writers groups? If so, what do you like about them? How do they help you or inspire you? If not, why not?

Years ago I was involved in a couple of writing groups and I found myself overthinking what it takes to write a good story. I think they can complicate the creative process. At least for me it does. A good story should flow naturally by the author without constantly thinking of structure and what the guy sitting next to me does to write. A good editor will work out all the kinks. A writer has to get it down on paper first.

Do you read the kinds of books you like to write?

Not really. There’s a really small group of authors I’ll read, but mostly I’m into nonfiction books. Yet, I’ve heard to become truly good at the craft, a writer should constantly be reading books in their genre. The trouble for me is that I feel guilty if I’m reading because I could be writing.

If you could write anywhere in the world in a fictional or nonfictional place where would you write?

Phoenix, Arizona. I spent some time there a couple of years ago. What a climate! I thrived in being able to sit outside day or night writing! There’s no downtime in the weather with rain or snow. I could sit out on the patio with my iPad and never come back inside!

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Connect with Kevin Zdrill:

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Check out Kevin Zdrill’s Crazy, Mixed Up World:

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Meet Author Joseph Murphy

You’ve never read two series quite so intricately woven together as Joseph Murphy’s. And you’ve never read books so well laid out. In editing Murphy’s books, I’ve often wondered how he kept everything so straight, especially in his latest book, Beyond the Black Sea. If you haven’t read it yet, it’s a must-read for lovers of good, solid fiction as well as authors who are hungry to learn more by reading quality writing.

I’m so happy to share with you this in-depth interview with Murphy. And if you haven’t read any of his books yet, they’re worth every penny – and you’ll want to read them again and again!

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Did you originally plan to have two separate series instead of one series, or did that decision come after you wrote Council of Peacocks? Did you plan for your two series to intertwine?

I always planned to write about the two worlds, but originally they were two separate stories. After finishing the first draft of A Fallen Hero Rises, I realized it would be much more fun to have them connected. I grew up on Marvel comics. The reason I preferred them to DC is the universe was more cohesive. DC allowed more writer freedom which meant individual comics didn’t necessarily relate to the others. In Marvel, the big events in one comic always affected everything else. For me, that’s much more interesting.

How long did it take you to plan both of your series before you began writing them?

Too long. Embarassingly long. I get a tad addicted to worldbuilding. So I took a year to write a few “source books” similar to the type a roleplaying game (like Dungeons and Dragons) would use. They turned into encyclopedias. I have a 700 page book detailing the various magic systems, secret organizations, and races on Earth and Maghe Sihre and a separate 400 page document detailing plant and animal life on Maghe Sihre. I actually wrote first editions of the first three books in the Sword of Kassandra series. It took me that long before I figured out where everything was going. Then I went back and completely rewrote the first book. It was worse for Council of Peacocks. I have rough drafts and very extensive notes of five books in that series. It meant that I spent seven years or so writing without any published books to show for it. The good news is I’ll be able to publish 2-3 books per year very easily now.

Do you mostly write in this particular genre or do you dabble in other genres? If so, which ones?

When I started writing, I wrote almost exclusively horror. Over the years that’s changed along with my reading taste. I have so many books I need to finish in the two series that I don’t really have time to dabble with anything else. I use a program called Evernote to keep track of all my story ideas. At the rate I’m going, I’ll have all the books in my writing queue finished in 2-3 years and finally be able to try something new.

What do you think makes your work stand apart from other works in your genre?

Wow. Good question. And hard to answer without sounding egotistical. It’s very important to me to have strong female characters. And lots of them. Women make up more than half the planet and they are severely under-represented in fantasy and sci-fi. Lord of the Rings is a perfect example. The movies have tried to address the issue by forcing in female characters. I apply the Bechdel test to every book I write. If you haven’t heard of the Bechdel test, it’s a way to determine if women have an active voice in a movie. It asks three questions: (1) does it have at least two women in it, (2) do they talk to each other (3) is their conversation about something other than a man. If the book doesn’t pass, I rewrite it.

In my new book, Beyond the Black Sea, the head of the U.N. council was male, as was a certain reptilian the characters meet in the later chapters. I changed their gender. Originally I wanted to make the book more balanced. It also made the characters more interesting because it forced me to think of them as people and not just placeholders.

Are any of the characters in your book based on people you know or have seen/talked to in real life?

Travis’ boss is based on a real boss I had. He was actually a bigger ass-hat in real life than he comes across as in the book.

Did your friends and family always know you were a writer? Were they surprised when you told them?

I started writing in 5th grade. So they shouldn’t be surprised. But I see this look in people’s eyes when they hold a copy of one of my books in their hands. Something about a paperback makes people realize I really did it.

What inspires you to write? Music? Other books? Real life events? Just an incredible imagination?

Watching movies and reading books. Nothing inspires me faster than looking at the stupid decisions characters make in movies and books. I get angry and then I head to the keyboard to “fix” the story. Council of Peacocks was inspired by the movie Wrong Turn. There’s a scene in the movie where the protagonists could kill the sleeping cannibal hill people…and they just try to sneak away. If you are ever confronted with monsters who have killed your friends and are now sleeping in front of you, you don’t run away. You drop a hammer on their head until they are sleeping forever. Sorry. As you can probably tell, I’m still very angry about that scene.

Are you part of any writers’ groups? If so, what do you like about them? How do they help you or inspire you? If not, why not?

I’m an active member of ASMSG. I’m the feature editor of their science fiction and fantasy emagazine, SFP Indie, and do cover art for the other upcoming emags. There is a ridiculous amount of talent in that group. They were founded to help writers improve their social media skills, but they’ve become so much more. They help with finding reviews, beta readers, editors, cover artists, handling the time crunch of deadlines. Every member I’ve met (and we have over 900) is always willing to help out other members. If a drama queen slips into the bunch, they are quickly removed from the group. I can easily say the group has made my experience as a writer much easier and more enjoyable.

Do you plan your writing out with outlines, character development exercises, and other pre-writing activities? Or do you just write as it comes to you?

Again, I probably did too much of this. As far as outlining books, I have them outlined until the end of the series. But once I start writing the first draft, things can change dramatically. I originally planned to kill off a certain character in Beyond the Black Sea. I really tried to kill him…but the story wouldn’t let me.

As for the characters, I know their dating history, which types of ice cream they prefer, their genealogy. I also know their birthdates because I wanted to make sure their personality fit their astrological sign. Almost none of that stuff ends up on the page. But it does mean when I sit down to write, I don’t have to think. I know my characters better than I know people in the real world.

How do you keep track of all the details of your multiple storylines in both books? It’s amazing how well you start to bring the Activation series and the Sword of Kassandra series together in your upcoming book, Beyond the Black Sea.

Lots and lots of notes. I also rarely sleep, which I think is a crucial element for anyone planning a career as a writer.

Did you do any research for either of your series?

Tons of research. I love reading books on conspiracy theories and paranormal events. I read David Icke books to learn about reptilians. I read books on Atlantis by Edgar Cayce, Ignatius Donnelly, Plato, and a few dozen others. I’ve been worldbuilding since I was a teenager. That amounts to over 30 years of compiling ideas. The good news is I probably don’t have to do any significant research for the rest of my life.

Do you read the kinds of books you like to write? Do you watch movies similar to or the same genre as your writing?

Yes. I think that’s another requirement. If you want to write a genre, you need to read a genre. If not, the reader is going to figure out very quickly that you’re a fake. I’m addicted to Jim Butcher, who writes urban fantasy and epic fantasy. I’d also pick Robert Jordan over George R.R. Martin any day. What I’ve realized by reading Martin is that I like a bit more fantasy in my fantasy and a little less reality.

If you could write anywhere in the world – in a fictional or non-fiction place – where would you write?

Fictional – Atlantis. They would have dreamcatching devices that could capture my dreams and turn them into finished, fully edited novels. Non-fictional, probably Venice, Italy. Wandering the streets there at night, after the cruise ships have left port, I realized it is one of the few truly magical places left on Earth.

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Connect with Joseph Murphy:

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Check out Joseph Murphy’s awesome books:

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Calling All Critiques: Final Wrap-Up

The first Calling All Critiques event was a success!

On behalf of all the bloggers, I want to thank all entrants and participants for taking time out of your busy schedules to take part. We hope you enjoyed it and perhaps learned something along the way. Got any suggestions on how to make the next event a success? Leave them in the comments!

Third Week Visiting Winner

The third week’s visiting winner who either commented or followed one of the participating bloggers on Twitter is:

Simon Clark

You’ll receive an email soon. You have until Thursday to respond with further information for us to send you your prize. If we don’t hear from you by then, a runner-up will be chosen.

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Again, thank you!

Calling All Critiques: Third Week Wrap-Up

Thank you to everyone who has participated so far in Calling All Critiques, whether you were a submitting author or a critiquer or just stopped by the blogs to see what was going on.

Second Week Visiting Winner

The second week’s visiting winner who either commented or followed one of the participating bloggers on Twitter is:

Alan Saxon

Alan, you should have received an email already. You have until Saturday to respond with further information for us to send you your prize. If we don’t hear from you by then, a runner-up will be chosen.

Query Letter / Book Blurb Random Winner

As a thank you to all the authors who submitted their work to be critiqued, we’ve randomly chosen one lucky winner who has a choice of the following prizes:

The query letter / book blurb week’s winner is:

Entrant #6
M.W.

M., look for an email in your inbox later today. You have until Sunday to respond as to which of the three prizes you want. If we don’t hear from you by then, a runner-up will be chosen. Once you choose your prize, we will provide you and the blogger with each other’s contact information to coordinate timing.

Final Wrap-Up Next Week

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Calling All Critiques: Book Blurb Entry #1

Thank you, Ichabod Temperance, for submitting your synopsis and excerpt to Calling All Critiques! We are so happy to post your book cover and give feedback.

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Author: Ichabod Temperance
Book title: The Adventures of Ichabod Temperance

Genre: Steampunk, Paranormal

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Synopsis from ‘A Matter of Temperance’

In a past that never was…
The year is 1869. Earth experiences the close pass of a comet never before seen. In its wake, many of Terra’s inhabitants find themselves changed. Among men, prodigies rise in unprecedented numbers, while many ordinary adults suddenly find themselves possessed of preternatural genius. Likewise, non-hominid animals become self-aware and intelligent.
Fast forward to 1875. A young “comet prodigy” from humble beginnings, Ichabod Temperance, has become the world’s foremost inventor. He travels to England to deliver his latest brilliant invention to a famous explorer, until Fate intervenes. Meanwhile, a lovely young Bluestocking, Miss Persephone Plumtartt, survives an experimental accident only to find herself imbued with a power she can neither understand nor control, while dark forces and malevolent creatures pursue her, leaving a gruesome wake of death.
Yet, worse is to come. The naïve young inventor and the lovely intellectual find themselves fighting not only to save their own lives, but to prevent the destruction of all life on Earth.
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Excerpt from ‘For the Love of Temperance’

“Twas the hand of fate that brought Miss Plumtartt and me together, for in truth, we have been happenstance stricken and adventure prone ever since.”

I pet the gentle and loving Mr. Bolt on the head.

“Some of you may have noticed an unusual amount of intelligence and empathy with our little dog Mr. Bolt. Miss Plumtartt and I are of the mind that he too, has been affected by the Revelatory Comet. She and I believe that many animals have kept a certain amount of psychic ability that we as humans, over the course of evolution, have lost. Bolt here, would appear to have an incredible amount of astounding psychic control.”

“Bolt? Would you care to give a little demonstration?”

The little dog, as usual, seems to be following the conversation. Though I do not think he really understands my words, he clearly seems to be able to take my meaning, either by intonation, body gestures, or reading my mind.

He looks around the campfire at his companions.

My skin is itchy. It is as if my body hair is grown in very thickly. In fact, it feels as if I am covered in hair. No! It feels as if I am covered in fur!

I look to the WickeThimble players. They all seem to have an uncomfortable expression on their faces. So too, does Miss Plumtartt. I can tell that they are squirming under the sensation of a wiry pelt. They are trying to appear casual, and not like they are wearing terrier pajamas.

Bolt wags his tail and everyone jumps up to look behind themselves for the phantom appendage.

Then I experience getting bit. It is a tiny, but sharp, bite.

“Bolt!” I exclaim. “Do you have a flea, buddy?”

The little dog gives a whimper, poor little guy.

I notice a few of my friends wanting to scratch at the bite of a flea upon their person that I know is not there. In fact, they are even attempting to scratch at the flea bite with their hind legs. I mean rear legs. I mean, their feet.

“Oh! I shall go next, then, shall I?” exclaims Clarabelle Nightingale excitedly. She is practically blazing with her enthusiasm. Great heaps of curly Titian hair almost seem to burst into flame with her inner fire.

“I appreciate your candor and your wonderful tales,” Clarabelle casts a questioning glance over at Bolt. “Though I am still feeling as if I am covered over in itchy fur, and my right leg has an almost uncontrollable urge to scratch behind my right ear utilizing my toes as digging implements.”

Beaming from ear to ear, Clarabelle warms into her story.

“I guess it’s been seven years now since the ‘Revelatory Comet’. I was seventeen at the time. Before that, singing had always been a part of my life. I pretty much grew up in the church choir, often being selected for solo parts. In school, I would eagerly pursue any sort of singing chance that was available. In any school performance or production, I was always there, and usually earned a satisfyingly challenging role.

“However, with the Comet’s passing, I immediately knew that I could do far more with my voice than I had ever realized. I could conjure an image of the structures and harmonies. The wavelengths of the auditory vibrations were visualized in my mind as if by magic. Soon, I could selectively vibrate an object, just by the placement of my pitch. I can shatter glass and crystal. I can even select the particular target in mind, as opposed to endangering all fragile objects, but it was not these parlour tricks that helped me to gain fame. It was my admittedly enhanced singing skills that brought me much fame and attention. I was getting some good bookings, but alas, I allowed my own need to show off get me in trouble. It started with a single crystal from the grand chandelier of the Paris opera house. I thought it would be a nice touch, to burst a single crystal at the peak of my aria. It worked! It was so fantastically dramatic! The whole house caught their breath. Several ladies let out a whelp of surprise and fear. Though several people were gouged by descending shards of crystal, no one complained. In fact, it was such a thrilling moment, that those wounded were honoured to be a part of that incredible experience. They thanked me profusely for selecting the one particular crystal that would strike them. Others were miffed at me for not having been selected to have deadly shards of lead crystal rain down upon them.”

“The kind managers of the opera house were very happy with me. I apologized, insisting that I had gotten carried away by being able to perform in such a magnificent palace as their opera house, and that I was very sorry for any property damage done. The two gentlemen exchanged a queer look. They then informed me that, though for the briefest of moments, the two men were outraged at my callous impropriety. However, the occupant of a particular box seat, a gentleman of the most mysterious connections with the theater, let it be known that he was happy with the performance. It is said that the box is always reserved for him on the opening night of all the proud opera house’s shows. Because this gentleman has so much influence in the theater for some reason, they decided to let the issue drop. My protector even sent me a dozen roses, but mysteriously, his card only read, ‘P’.”

“Well, I thought to meself, Clarabelle, if one little crystal worked well for a bit of notoriety, maybe I’ll just turn it on just a wee bit more next time.”

“Oh, if I could only go back and do it again.”

“You see, our next show was in Lichtenstein, at the famous GuberGraüberz Hall. Some of the grandest crowned heads of Europe were in attendance. Prince Pimpzle Pauper, Duchess Poutsy Illtempertz, and even Queen Glarezalotte were there.”

“Word had spread of my performance in Paris and there was much excitement for another historic moment to be made. As I grew closer to the crescendo, I could feel the anticipation growing in the audience. I could make out parasols and umbrellas being brought to hand in readiness of a glass shower.”

At the fireside, Clarabelle drops her head in a moment of embarrassment. She then looks back up, much of her previous enthusiasm dampened.

“I was really in the moment. I knew that I was not going to disappoint my audience.”

“As I hit my final, ultimate note, I held it in a moment of extended bliss. I may have heard the chandelier shattering, but in truth, I was caught up in the musical ecstasy.”

“Eventually, I remember to end the note. Opening my eyes, I am shocked at the damage done. Not only has any glass or crystal in the house shattered, even opera glasses or monocles, it has mercifully been powderized back into sand. And there are a lot of monocles in Lichtenstein.”

“The entire audience has been blasted up against the back wall. Along with the seating. And it was bolted down.”

“But I think it was how I was able to peel the gold leaf from the balcony and surrounding ornate parapets that really made a lasting impression.”

“A few of the more sporting vocal enthusiasts provided a polite smattering of applause, but these brave aficionados were quickly shot down with a venomous look by Queen Glarezalotte. Her wig had been knocked asunder, her skirts thrown over her head, and several patrons, along with a few members of the orchestra, had landed atop of her royal highness during the furor of the performance.”

“‘Off with her head!’ the angry woman shrieked! I was very nearly executed on the spot. Fortunately, cooler heads prevailed long enough to rush me out of the wrecked Hall.”

“In a majestic rage, Queen Glarezalotte banished me from the kingdom and did everything she could to have me black-balled throughout the World.”

Several tongue snicks against the roofs of several mouths around the campfire click in sympathy. A few ‘Mmm. mmm, mmm’s,’ too.

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